Pretty good for a debut, but you could totally tell she had it coming. That's the problem with retellings- you always know what's going to happen. Though, I did find some errors in the book, and it always makes me feel like the editors are on strike. Also, the book is kind of long to read all at once, and I felt like the story should be over somewhere between a quarter and half of the way through. It's kind of drawn out... plus, you never find out what the main character looks like. So apparently everyone (meaning, Rosie, Harte, and Randall) has blue eyes...?